Saturday, 9 April 2011

ETERNAL FRIENDSHIP

I was unknown ,
whether I was going on your way,
or whether I met you on my way ?
I thought  I should stay for a while with you ...
That day ,your shade,was not able to hide  me.
Your shade was smaller than my sturcture
but i felt relief by sitting in the same shade.


A little bit of shade brings drowsiness ,
Fear of time that goes away with the blink of eyes ,
Frightens the traveler everyday ,
Every afternoon.
That very day my eyes felt sleepy
I started narrating the story of my life,
as  if  I was talking to myself .
But I knew you were listening to my words
And at a moment ,I felt, I talked almost everything to you.

I do not want anything from this friendship.
Even if i don't understand your language,I do understand your silence.
Even if i don't get any profit from you,
There's a lot above profit and loss,
That's our eternal friendship.
I don't expect your fruits and seeds from you,
neither i have any intention of harming you .
Lost in a desert ,I found a mirage of water in you,
In that moment ,a little touch of sensuousness ,
is what i belief is the best gift from you .....

11 comments:

  1. Wow Shruti!! I don't have enough words to describe how wonderful this is...It's so emotional and touchy!! "Friendship" is impossible to define, but the way you have portrayed it!! It just needs no more clarification or justification or whatever !! Perfect!! In short i just loved it! too too too good :) Keep it up!! :) :D

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  2. your name accomplishes in your writing great job done.. keep it up!

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  3. awesome di.....loved it...
    keep writin...gr8 goinn <3 :)

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  4. its...really...wonderfull....
    u have got excellent narrating style...and great creativity...keep it up....

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  5. really shruti gr8 job...kp it up...:)..god bless u

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  6. thanx lucky di.. really loved ur comment,thanx bubun bhai,gargi,roma ,aparajita,sambit and smita miss :)

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  7. Gudu u r great.ur writings r so touchy my eyes filld with tears.in this materialistic world very few people gives honour to friendship love affection.God bless u.Keep it up

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  8. wow.. I have no words to comment how beautifully you can write :) keep it up sweetheart :)

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