Friday, 29 April 2011

SUMMER

When I first met you ,
You were standing in my garden,
Dressed like a girl in turqoise blue
Or seemed like blooming flowers of a shrub,
I came running to you,
I saw,
You were playing in the waves,
like a golden fish in the water.


I fell in love with you.
It seemed like a mid-day.
Shining in your youth in a mirror.
You made me blind for a while.
Your rays are sometime like the forget - me - not
And sometime it is like the growling tigress.
In my eyes I have a
childlike curosity for you.

The day when you forgot me,
In my garden lines and lines
of sunflower drooped in the hot afternoon....
I kept waiting for you all day,
with the hope that you will return one day...

Your love is like a summer day.
When its night,it is suffocating as you are not there.
Then my breathe is full of hot air;
I am searching for you day and night.
I will be searching for you my whole life....





11 comments:

  1. wow.....................
    it is just aswm yaar.
    a beautiful with full f meaning poem

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  2. the feelings u invoke thru letters is intoxicatingly beautiful to b ignored.keep it up.

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  3. superb sweety.............keep the magic living

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  4. the feeling of missing someone special and writing about tht person to relive the moments of both joy and the realisation of tht person's absence has been described so well :)

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  5. hey ds iz ossssum...!! d poetic lines r jus superb...!! d way u xpressed it iz jus so hart touching... suupppaaalyk..<3<3

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  6. awesome !!!!!!! u write vry wel... luv ur poemz baby.... :) :)

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  7. its....too good...yaar....well done...keep it up...

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  8. beautiful...keep it up...:)

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  9. thanx a lot everyone for ur lovely comments... :)

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  10. nice poem.feelings only undrestand feelings!keep it up.god bless u

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  11. amazing dear! The joy of falling in love at the very first sight of the counter part and at the same longing for the undying love....
    The unconditional love!!!
    The pain of missing the loved one!!
    So well written :)
    I lauved it!! keept it up :)

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